My forays into writing poetry have always been very brief. While I’ve always read poems, never have I considered sufficiently talented to write one. It’s bit bold of me to even exhibit what poems I’ve written, as I’ve often regarded them fruitless exercises. Not worth even having a read. However, I’m going to change that, emboldened after a month long practice. Also, I’m very receptive to criticism.
A first liaison
He scratches his forehead.
She shuffles her satchel,
Shifts the scarf tied around her neck.
A pub, he proposes,
His finger pointing in the direction.
“Too noisy,” she suggests.
He gazes down,
At her.
With a clumsy smile.
She knows a quiet place.
A restaurant, she says.
Looking at the direction of the place.
Ok, the man agrees.
You know the place best.
Since you work in the area.
Then they walk away,
With an awkward distance between them,
Into the evening breeze.
A first liaison
He scratches his forehead.
She shuffles her satchel,
Shifts the scarf tied around her neck.
A pub, he proposes,
His finger pointing in the direction.
“Too noisy,” she suggests.
He gazes down,
At her.
With a clumsy smile.
She knows a quiet place.
A restaurant, she says.
Looking at the direction of the place.
Ok, the man agrees.
You know the place best.
Since you work in the area.
Then they walk away,
With an awkward distance between them,
Into the evening breeze.

2 Comments:
Ah poetry...something I know a little about. It doesn't have to be any set way or have any guidlines as long as it paints the picture with wonderful words. I rather like it. With writing I can sit there and edit over and over again and always find some way to make it better. We are our own worst critics. I have written many, many notebooks full of poems. Might have to post one of mine and see how I fair. Keep it up, you're a joy to read!
Practice makes you perfect. Gotta keep trying if you love something.
Thanks for enjoying me writing.
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